tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post6615393698596804427..comments2012-03-10T22:56:40.880-08:00Comments on The McKinley Clan: Chapter 0.3: Misguided MissionBuckleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15791098360536318915noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-71544983163945391492012-01-04T20:23:26.577-08:002012-01-04T20:23:26.577-08:00Snap! What a great story so far! I'm supposed ...Snap! What a great story so far! I'm supposed to be going to sleep but who can sleep after reading that chapter? Onward to the next one!JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-43625687003532205772012-01-04T20:22:31.049-08:002012-01-04T20:22:31.049-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-22597771659613871582011-09-06T11:09:25.336-07:002011-09-06T11:09:25.336-07:00Wow, that was a chapter full of surprises! Can...Wow, that was a chapter full of surprises! Can't wait to see where you go from hereAliHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15088235841224977814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-92086251683570087412011-09-06T10:39:10.155-07:002011-09-06T10:39:10.155-07:00Ooh. Ethan is gorgeous! And I agree with Cece. Pl...Ooh. Ethan is gorgeous! And I agree with Cece. Please don't deflate my happy balloon by making him a bad guy... I love Ethan1!!! Exclamation!!!<br /><br />Great Chapter and looking forward to reading where this goes.GigaRevivalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16416368229832346047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-2686494022689510982011-09-06T04:35:35.819-07:002011-09-06T04:35:35.819-07:00oooh, intrigue! I love it!
Really, really great ch...oooh, intrigue! I love it!<br />Really, really great chapter.yangthecathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15083940950118677312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-87513980037289112782011-09-05T19:26:20.638-07:002011-09-05T19:26:20.638-07:00Thanks Red. I was nervous about how this chapter w...Thanks Red. I was nervous about how this chapter would come across, so I'm really glad you like it.<br /><br />And Cece, you just made my day (night). =) It's nice to hear when you are improving. As for his career, he really is a secret agent, in the law enforcement career track. It's the job story progression gave him, so I thought I'd go with it. I'm glad it was a surprise though.Buckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15791098360536318915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-28607191934113853552011-09-05T19:16:54.772-07:002011-09-05T19:16:54.772-07:00Please please please don't make Ethan into a p...Please please please don't make Ethan into a piece of scum. It's all daddy's fault. It has to be! Don't go breaking my heart!<br /><br />Other then that, I just want you to know that your writing is getting better with each chapter. I love Brian. The idea of him as a secret agent was awesome! Totally didn't see that coming. At all. *slow clap* brilliant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6438173099245407196.post-32491857064739231642011-09-05T18:47:20.322-07:002011-09-05T18:47:20.322-07:00Woo hoo!! Awesome chapter! A secret mission, Bea...Woo hoo!! Awesome chapter! A secret mission, Bea getting double crossed by Brian and now Ethan showing up?? Amazing!!<br /><br />And never apologize for a chapter being "long", especially when it's this good. =)Redhead Creationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16622159593521956793noreply@blogger.com